ext_61675 ([identity profile] x-los.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] magibrain 2008-02-03 09:25 pm (UTC)

There's a TAG for me having made you do it now? Sweet christ. What did I own YOU again upon completion? I utterly for- SHIT NO I DON'T. Don't I have to write torture? Eugh! EUGH! Godammit!

Because it's you, it is character driven and lovely. The

In their time together the Master has seen him use: a gun, a knife, grenades, a noose, a stone. He enjoyed none of the deaths, but neither did he cry.

I love this sentence, but am unsure whether I like the uncertain pronoun use here, because while I could see it being true of D quite naturally I dunno about M?

The TARDIS, covetous and cruel, reaches up to surround them, weird energies moving in her wires.

Fantastic. And I mean that without the little wince I developed remembering who says 'fantastic' in this scenario.

The verb 'crucifies' is exquisitely well employed in the earlier paragraph.

The Doctor's mind is a still blade, edged and absolute. It is ready to cut him open. The Master is ready to let it. He stands.

This stands as a great summation fo the entire dynamic you established.

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