Oh wow, this is so lovely! *flails at it* These are such great little character snapshots, sharp and crisp and well drawn. I think you have a fantastic handle on Neal, on how he thinks and all his little cracks and sharp edges and weak places, as well as the equal parts of edginess and affection in his relationship with Peter. I think the Bancroft section was my favorite, though, for their careful verbal sparring and all the many unsaid things between the things they were saying -- I'm really impressed at how you took a small element from the show and turn it into a perfect metaphor for Neal and his newly redrawn relationships with the people around him ... and with himself. They're all great, though; the first and last ones are particularly adorable.

I'm always completely delighted to see a new fic from you. :D