Hee, quite all right. I soon discovered that I was far too antsy to wait for concrit in any case. And then I spent a lot of time revising ofic and might have just fallen over and gibbered, if I had to revise this.
...this is, I'll admit, one of those that I write out and then am incapable of reading over, because quite a lot of it makes we squirm uncomfortably. Ah, pissing contests. Stretching my authorial boundaries since... sometime in the past.
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Date: 2008-02-04 12:04 am (UTC)...this is, I'll admit, one of those that I write out and then am incapable of reading over, because quite a lot of it makes we squirm uncomfortably. Ah, pissing contests. Stretching my authorial boundaries since... sometime in the past.
:P