Thanks! I've started working on an outline, and realized that the way it's going currently, it's from Jack's POV rather than Hammond's and the only ambiguous possession to him is Sam's. I'm not sure whether or not she's really possessed or not. Leaning towards yes, though, because if she is then the prisoner in her can either actually be innocent of the crime he/she was accused of or just isn't really friends with the ones inside Daniel and Teal'c.
It's going to be linear, starting with SG-1 on the planet and something weird happening. At this point, I've got SG-1 acting normally all the way through the post-op checkup and debriefing, but then afterwards Daniel tells Jack that he wants to leave the base. Jack won't let him because Dr. Frasier imposed a 24 hour quarantine on them after she heard that something strange happened, so Daniel tries to shoot Jack. Jack tells Sam, who says she doesn't believe him, and Hammond, who sends SF's to take Daniel into custody just in case. When they find Daniel, though, he looks terrified and is claiming that Jack was threatening him.
Love the detector idea! If it works, it's probably some sort of small EEG machine because they can't get SG-1 into the infirmary to do a proper one.
I'm definitely going to have to write another version from Hammond's POV where he has no idea what's going on. I need to get this one down first, though.
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Date: 2013-08-05 07:13 am (UTC)It's going to be linear, starting with SG-1 on the planet and something weird happening. At this point, I've got SG-1 acting normally all the way through the post-op checkup and debriefing, but then afterwards Daniel tells Jack that he wants to leave the base. Jack won't let him because Dr. Frasier imposed a 24 hour quarantine on them after she heard that something strange happened, so Daniel tries to shoot Jack. Jack tells Sam, who says she doesn't believe him, and Hammond, who sends SF's to take Daniel into custody just in case. When they find Daniel, though, he looks terrified and is claiming that Jack was threatening him.
Love the detector idea! If it works, it's probably some sort of small EEG machine because they can't get SG-1 into the infirmary to do a proper one.
I'm definitely going to have to write another version from Hammond's POV where he has no idea what's going on. I need to get this one down first, though.