This was really excellent, and I loved reading it! I liked all the little moments, and the examination of them and all the details you added. My favourite section was the last one, both because I'm a massive junkie for Neal h/c and because Diana being awesome, but I also really liked the section with Bancroft and all the characterisation you gave him.
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Date: 2013-05-30 07:44 pm (UTC)