...I actually didn't have a chance to read this through, beginning-to-end, before I posted it, so I'm also glad to hear that it works as a story. (Though I suppose in a way, rough edges could actually contribute to an atmosphere of creepiness. Maybe I'll just go with that.)
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Date: 2014-02-10 10:06 pm (UTC)...I actually didn't have a chance to read this through, beginning-to-end, before I posted it, so I'm also glad to hear that it works as a story. (Though I suppose in a way, rough edges could actually contribute to an atmosphere of creepiness. Maybe I'll just go with that.)